I just saw a post by diannegray She is inviting people to play the game Look.
The idea of the game is to locate the word ‘look’ in whatever manuscript you have lying around, then post it with the surrounding paragraphs. Afterwards, invite other authors to do the same. These paragraphs are from my first attempt at a novel – nowhere near finished yet, but I’d love some comments to see what you think.
Ethan looked at himself in the mirror for the third time. The deep circles under his eyes and the numerous laugh lines did much to convince him that he had earned each of his 38 years. Laugh lines he thought, were the definition of irony. He couldn’t remember the last time he had laughed. Hell, he couldn’t remember the last time he had smiled. Pulling his gaze from the mirror, Ethan glanced around his modest condominium. The collection of…
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